Analgesia

My toy train just hit a mountain,
I tried to build the tracks around
The river,
But I ran out.
 
The ceiling fan sprinkles dust
On my little planet,
And I imagine it snowing.
 
I need a new track.
 
It settles in now,
The glorious numbness,
Prickling my skin
From the inside.
 
Ever ever after,
The storybook ending
Hidden inside a gelatin crust.

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15 kommenttia artikkeliin ”Analgesia

  1. I'm a poor reader for you as I have never experienced anything like that. Aspirin just works or it doesn't and I carry on; but your imagery is vivid and makes graphic allusions to losing reality in a drug induced world. Thanks, Gay

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  2. there was a time when i experimented with drugs and you captured the illusions quite well in your poem – luckily i found a way out of this as it paints pictures of fake worlds and fake freedom, keeps up prisoned and bound and destroys the personality.

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  3. Very creative way of talking about pills and drugs… great images too specially these:

    The storybook ending
    Hidden inside a gelatin crust.

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  4. hey lilu – just thought i come back and read it once again..sorry if my first comment was a bit rough…your poem took me back into a time i'd rather forget…so guess i got a bit impulsive.. and maybe bri is right and you're not talking that much about drugs but about much more..i too love the broken train…

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  5. Thanks for commenting guys. Brian Miller's right here, I'm not exactly talking about drugs into the extent of using non-prescribed ones…

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  6. OMG – I love this. Mental health hallucinations and the crappy choices we have as resources for their destruction. Well thats what I read anyway. There are never enough tracks and it keeps on snowing! Great addition to my linky this week – as always. Many thanks! Shah from weekend creation. X

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  7. Beautiful imagery….Thank goodness I've never been there. What scares me the most is that if I ever really tried drugs, I'd become dependent and there would be no way out for me.

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